Revise your novel

To make AI fiction sound human, delete-test each flagged line, revise the rest in three ordered passes, and cap cuts so the prose never goes telegraphic.

Audit AI-assisted fiction for factual, rule, timeline, causal, and cost conflicts. Cite both sides, separate evidence from severity, and recheck later chapters.

Diagnose goal, resistance, causality, scene or energy. Ask what the next step changes to find one writable action; avoid new lore and random accidents.

AI drifts over a long novel when the model is asked to remember the whole book. Oh Story keeps the state in files instead: what is true in the story, what each…

Describe the dimensions of your voice, give a short sample you own or may use, and keep those choices separate from the current book’s facts.

Sort review comments before you rewrite anything. Connect each criticism to a passage and an established story constraint, then decide what to fix, what needs…

Study fiction with a fact log and mechanism card. An original scene shows how to separate disclosure, pacing and transferable methods.

Diagnose a sagging serial through short-term questions, arc goals and the whole-story promise. Restore progress without abandoning the original appeal.

Learn from a trope’s dramatic function and emotional payoff, then redesign its characters, setting and causal chain. Includes an original worked example.

Spot web-fiction dealbreakers, from forced foolishness to stolen rewards. Use information, motives and consequences to judge what can be repaired.

Treat AI-like words as clues. Diagnose explanatory tone, vague emotion, and stock actions by function; rewrite with information, choice, and consequence.

Repair choppy fragments, action lists, and broken dialogue caused by over-editing. Lock the facts, then restore only necessary links and scene continuity.

AI chapter too short? Audit approved beats. Add only missing action, resistance, choice, and results; revise the plan or accept the current length.

Check route rules and AI-source provenance before submission. Includes a checklist, audit prompt, original example, and final-file check.

Fix AI fiction that repeats one beat as action, bodily reaction, and explanation. Use a mark-and-merge worksheet, example, checklist, and prompt.

Turn an event list into a causal chain. Check knowledge, choices and outcomes with an original investigation example and a revision table.

Track goals, knowledge, relationships and unpaid costs between episodes. Includes a handoff example and repairs for unexplained knowledge or reset states.

Break paragraphs at meaningful changes without fragmenting a continuous thought. Includes an original passage and repairs for dense or choppy prose.

Use names to reset attribution and pronouns to carry a continuous action. Includes an original group scene and a before-and-after revision.

Trace changed script facts to existing assets, storyboards and prompts. Includes an original injury-timing example and a selective update table.

Trace a revised fact through written chapters. Check clues, knowledge and object ownership with an original example and a downstream-impact worksheet.

Locate repetition in causality, strategy, expression and shots. Includes an original diagnostic table and exceptions for deliberate recurring forms.

Choose sensory detail through task, perceptual access and purpose. An original backstage revision shows when to use one sense or omit decoration.

Vary sentence length for continuity, emphasis and pause while preserving facts. Compare three original versions of a string breaking on stage.